SpiritofHokutoXX Destroyer Ring{old version, not correct in this episode}
denshousha{old version, not correct in this episode}
Welcome to the paradise of dreams, Märchentic Amusement Park!
{Hair Hunters A
-block Captain: Tokoro Tennosuke}
Now behold, the potential {splitted and flared lines}
of my true power!
The Hippo Mastermind Revealed!
Narrator
-Bo
-bobo and friends paid a visit to the Nose Hair Dojo. {I'd go with "Bo
-bobo and Company" it sounds more narrator styled}
Nose Hair Dojo
Narrator
-Within the dojo, {flared line} {I'd with "Within the dojo"}
Narrator
-the hellish training began. {he says jigoku, so maybe Hellish instead of hellish?} {I'd go with "Brave men" because valor sounds too pushed}
Narrator
-Brave men showed up one after another,
Narrator
-until finally this mysterious old woman showed up.
Nose Hair Clone!
What?
Three old ladies...
Four old ladies...
Five old ladies...
One old man...
Six old ladies...
Can you see through our technique?
Narrator
-Heppokomaru's in danger! What's going to happen?
Narrator
-But all of a sudden... {I'd go with "All of a sudden..." it sounds more narrator like}
Purukogi! Purukogi!
Oh! It's almost time for Bo
-bobo! Let's go home!
Wait, what?
For the love of God... This isn't the time for a recap! {made her speak like an old woman} {I'd go with "For the love of God... This isn't the time for a recap!"}
Gotta go home! I can't miss this!
- Wait for me, old ladies!
- Huh? They all left? {I'd go with "Huh!?" even though she's saying "what" cause "Huh" fits the context.}
Narrator
-I gotta see this too! You guys take over, okay? {added this} {I'd go with "I gotta see this" so he sounds more desperate}
Take over? What do you...?
Is he leaving too?
A
-Anyway, it's time to start the show! {added the show}
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(Get up!) Stand up.
Stop dropping dead all the time,
Come and fly away!
Step on it!
b*mb it!
Go! Go! Tricky Style!
Hurry and hit the gong!
That's the kind of era we're in,
We can't be stopped!
,, Blow! Megaton Puncher!
Fighting Soul! expl*sive Power!
Punch a dent into logic!
Crash b*mb! C'mon, Block Buster!
Let's jet go! Straight down our path!
I'm an up and coming fighter!
(Like a Phatman)
Like a macho man
Push ahead
Really hard
Like a starving wild challenger!
Say what? Bo
-bobo!
Say what? Bo
-bobo!
Say what? Bo
-bobo!
(Get up!) Stand up.
Kutabatte bakkainna
Buttonde ikou janai
Funbatte
b*mber tte
Go! Go! Tricky Style!
Hayaku narase gongu
Konna jidai da ze
Oretachi wa tomerarenai
Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on!
Come on! Come on! Come on! Come on!
Get out!
「, , Blow」 Megaton kyuu puncher
「Fighting Soul」 Yo! Hajikeru power
Bukkowashiteenda joushikitte yatsu wo
Yes come on!
「Crash b*mb」 ittoke Block Buster
「Let's Jet Go」 Waga michi masshigura
Kakeagare faitaa!
(Like a Phatman)
Binbin macho de
Gangan ittoke!
Banban hard na
Ueta Wild Challenger!
wobbly
wobbly
appears!
Tokoro Tennosuke!
"A wobbly foe appears! His name is Tokoro Tennosuke!"
Narrator
-Bo
-bobo and company have settled in the countryside. {Again I'd go with "Bo
-bobo and company"}
Sir Bo
-bobo
Sir Don Patch
Happy, Happy,
I'm always happy... {Galacta Knight from the Kirby games?}
What a great day t'day!
Mah back's all worn
-out.
Ey! Sir Bo
-bobo!
Whatcha doin' t'day?
Ah, if't ain't Sir Don Patch!
T'day's such a fine day, I thought I'd plant me some disposable chopsticks!
Oh is that so? {flared line}
By the way, I chilled a watermelon in the stream, ya fancy some? {changed to fancy, more medieval terms}
Ah! Of course I'd like some! {more medieval speak}
Huh?
Pencil Box
Pencils... Pencils... Pencils... Pencils...
Hey! It's that no
-good pencil box again! Get off mah property! {added hey} {I'd go with "It's that no good pencil box again!"}
Pencils!
I told ya those there ain't even pencils! {changed to aren't, figured if Sir
-Bo
-bobo would sayin medieval talk}
Hey Bo
-bobo!
What is it? {added is it}
I can't seem to find Hekkun anywhere! {flared line}
Do you know where he went?
I... reckon he's out by that there stream training. {added I... to make it sound as if he's pausing when he speaks}
What's that sound?
It's the signal to start.
Perfect Perfect Perfect Perfect
Do your best! Do your best! Do your best! Do your best!
What's that? What are you doing?
What? What? What is this thing? {Go with "What is this thing" since she has no clue}
What is this? What are they doing?
Perfect Perfect Perfect Perfect {I've got an idea for this line, I've splitted both lines, one will say perfect for all of them and then on the second line you see jealousy, making it as if they see the word coming and makes it more understandable}
Perfect Jealousy Perfect Perfect {Can we changed the order so that Jealousy comes last?}
Perfect Perfect Perfect Jealousy {Can we changed the order so that Jealousy comes last?}
There it is!
Is it over?
Congratulations! You've reached meters!
Well, that's that.
Now... This should do it.
What's this for?
Just watch.
Alright. {added alright}
Pencils! Pencils! Pencils! {please time}
Here he comes!
Pencils! Pencils! Pencils! Pencils!
This is...
No... There's no way... {changed it a bit rather than just saying it can't be all the time}
It can't be...
It can't be... {he says it again here}
Hey, what's he doing?
Just be quiet and watch.
Perfect Perfect Perfect Perfect
It's... It's...
{My Mother's Handwriting...}
My mother's handwriting...
No... No way...
You're... Are you... Are you... {he says Are you twice}
Mother!?
Smear smear smeeeeeear smear!
It's a lie! It's a lie!
It's all a lie! {he says it again here}
It's no use! {changed from use to good} {I'd go back to "It's no use!" it sounds proper, Lol}
I can't keep dodging it!
At least we'll die together!
They are good friends ♥
There!
SUKIYAKI
I wonder what Hekkun's doing? {removed ... for ?}
No! You gotta put your whole body into it!
Hey you! You better listen to me! {flaref line}
Fish Master
Mr. Bo
-bobo has asked me to forcefully train you here! {flared line but I don't know if vigorously is a UK or US spelling} {I would go with "Forcefully" since they make Hekkun sound like a p*ssy in strength and the fish has to force him to become better lol}
What kind of training is this?
Hey! Stop playing with yourself and move those hands! {I'd go with "Stop playing with yourself" so it sounds like the fish is a hard a*s and when Hekkun replies it sounds on point lol}
That hurt, you fish b*stard!
Foolish boy! Don't talk back to me! {flared line}{I think the mic was gonna break when he shouted this line}
I get it already.
sh*t... Young people these days... {I'd go wth him saying "sh*t..." so it sounds like he's stressed lol}
They don't do any work! All they do is talk, talk, talk! {I'd go with "All they do is talk, talk, talk!}
But... Lately... These days... {sounds like he's saying things to }
I've always liked that about you! {added always}
What are these feelings I'm having?
Could this... Could this be...
No... No, I can't...
I'm his master and he's my student! {I'd go with "I'm his master and he's my student!" so it sounds more intamite lol}
That's right! I have to keep it in!
I can't... I just can't...
I have to keep it in!
Keep it in...
I can't keep it in!
I'm gonna eat you! I'm gonna eat you up! {he says it twice}
What the hell are you doing?
Help me!
Somebody help me! I can't swim! {changed to small h}
(Oh, no!
(Oh, no!
Today, I met a weird fish. It was a really lousy day.
Hey, I got a bingo! {flared line}
Don... PATCH! {Can we do an alpha code on this line on each syllable?}
Well, tomorrow's the chopstick harvest, so I'm going to bed.
You guys should get to bed soon, too.
Okay, I'm going to bed too. Good night.
Okay, good night. {added yeah} {Instead of "Yeah" put "Okay" so it sounds like he's being polite since "Yeah" sounds more like f*ck off, Lol}
Sweet dreams!
I got a bingo too!
Don... PATCH! {and the same for alpha cone on this line}
The hell's wrong with you? {LOL his face perfectly says: "The f*ck's wrong with you?} {I love what he said here go with that, Lol}
Marker Felt Thin PlainIdiot!
"This guy was also really lousy.''
Mother...
I know not where you are.
But I will find you one day!
Wha...
What's...
That? {added ... for the pauses and splitted the lines for keep the scene tense}
Hey, are you alright? {added hey}
Yeah...
Mother! {I'm hearing Mom being said here}
Splendid!
I'll make this my base.
Bo
-bobo, it's morning!
I'm coming in! {splitted line}
Bo
-bobo! It's morn... {added ...}
My head feels like it's gonna split!
That's a huge head! {re
-worded line}
It's splitting. ♥
It's closing. ♥
It's splitting. ♥
It's closing. ♥
It's splitting. ♥
The Pencil Household
How is it? It's a big house, isn't it?
Pencil (Mother)
Pencil (Father)
Yes. It's very big.
Eraser (Dog)
Pencil (Child)
I never thought we'd find another house so soon.
It's all thanks to Mr. Bo
-bobo.
Alright, I'm off to the chopstick field.
We're here!
This is...
Märchentic Amusement Park {do NOT place this subtitle any lower, I wanna avoid overscan
}Someone built an amusement park here!
There is no reason to be so surprised.
Since ancient times, this village has always grown amusement parks {added always} {I'd go with "Since the ancient times, this village..."}
Elder Patch
from disposable chopsticks.
Now what? {reversed words}
Elder!
If the other villages know about this... {I'd go with "If the other villagers know about this..."}
Sorry, sorry.
Now, let us wake the villagers! Wake the villagers!
Hi, everybody!
Welcome to the paradise of dreams,
Märchentic Amusement Park!
Tour Guide of Dreams Kegirl
Who are you?
I'm the Tour Guide of Dreams, Kegirl.
Amusement Park! Amusement park!
Hey, hey, calm yourself down. {I'd go with "Hey, hey, calm yourself down."}
But you know... You know...
Darling, you're always at work, so we haven't gone on a date in so long... {Instead of "been" go with "gone"}
I'm so happy... So happy...
So I just spontaneously...
Transform into a beastman! {please split}{is the timing right on these two lines? Let me know if they're not} {I'd go with "transformed" instead of "turn"}
Me too!
Now before you enter Märchentic Amusement Park...
Please have a look at this.
{Märchentic Amusement Park}
Welcome, la...
Please pay attention.
Yeah, sure. {retimed line} {re
-worded line}
Welcome ladies and gentlemen, to Hair Hunters A
-block Base, Märchentic Amusement Park.
I am Hair Hunters A
-block Captain, Tok...
Darling!
W
-Who did this to you? {flared line}
They'll pay for this, I swear!
Please pay attention!
Oh, right. {changed to a ,}
Excuse me...
I am Hair Hunters A
-block Captain, Tokoro Tennosuke.
What? Captain?
Don't leave without me!
Didn't you... Didn't you say we'd fulfill our dream together? {retimed line}
Ladies and gentlemen,
I am A
-block Captain Tokoro Tennosuke.
What? A
-block Captain?
First, I must thank you for creating this base for me.
Thank you.
Thank you so very much! {removed extra !}
I'm made of tokoroten... {are we putting tokoroten in or jelly here? Or is tokoroten a type of jelly?}
so whenever I tried to make an A
-block base, my budget was always so much smaller than the other bases. {removed ..}
And on top of that, we took shortcuts in construction and got reported for not having permits... {I'd make it really funny and go with "Reported for not having permits" cause in construction if you don't have a license and permit you're pretty much f*cked, Lol}
And everyone made fun of me...
It was harsh... It was so harsh...
Captain.
But that ends today!
I've got a wonderful base now!
Yay! Yay!
Yay! Yay! Yay!
Uh, Captain...
Hooray! Hooray! Hooray!
Please calm down, Capta
- Stop it... {he says "mattae" so I don't know what word to put in so I cut Captain in half and and added stop it}
Sorry about this. Our captain is a bit of a lunatic. {flared line}
You moron, I ain't tofu!
I'm joking! Sorry! {re
-worded line to fit sentence}
Now let me get straight to the point. {re
-worded line}
Take a look at this guy.
I'm sorry guys. I screwed up big time. {added guys to flare line}
Tomohiro
Tomohiro!!!
Who's that!?
Here, have some spaghetti!
Spaghetti! Spaghetti!
I'll never give in to your spaghetti!
We have curry! We have curry!
Come on, it's spaghetti! Spaghetti! {flared line}
You better hurry and take the spaghetti! {flared line}
We have curry!
Look... Spaghetti...
We have curry!
Hurry and take the spaghetti!
It's my curry.
That's it, Tomohiro! Indian! Indian! {As an Indian I just laughed at this, it's strange that are Indian references in the Bo
-bobo series}
Très bien! Très bien!
You...!
Son of a...
Hold on a sec! What is this? {re
-worded line}
There aren't enough potatoes in this curry! {And yes, even I like potatoes in my curry as well, what a coindence}
What's the meaning of this?
I'm really sorry.
What the f*ck are ya doin'!? {I'd go with since he's so pissed off "What the f*ck are you doin!?" lol}
Ya think that's the kind of attitude for an apology? I will not accept it! {re
-worded nd part of the line}
Take off your mask and apologize!
Finish your studies!
It's her! It's the amusement park specialty Education Mom! {re
-worded to it's her}
You have to get into a prestigious school!
I'm hidden somewhere in this amusement park. {added located} {I would go with "hidden" since he's a villain and that's what they do hide, Lol}
If you want this guy back, you better come and find me. {added better come}
Here. Spa
-spa!
Spa
-spa!
I'll never give in to spaghetti!
Tomohiro!
Do you think you can find me? {I'd go with "Do you think you can find me?"}
Anyhow... Good luck finding me! {I'd go with "Anywho.... Good luck finding me" to make him sound arrogant, Lol}
He won't get away with this. How dare he do that to Tomohiro... {removed the ...}
But who the hell is Tomohiro?
Heppokomaru,
from here on out, this is my battle of destiny with the Hair Hunters. {Added this}
You can go home now. {re
-worded line}
Get real. This is what I've been waiting for. {re
-worded line}
Alright then. If you insist, then come along. {re
-worded line}
Isn't that great, Hekkun?
Yeah.
Perfect. I've been training all this time.
This is a great opportunity to test my strength. {I'd use "great" instead of "good" so it sounds like he's improved a lot}
Okay. Let's go!
Yep!
OK!
Hey, mom, can I go too?
No, you cannot! {flared line}
Monkey Train
It's huge!
Hey! Hey! Hey!
Hekkun!
What is it? {flared line}
What should we ride first? {added first}
If we're at an amusement park...
Don Patch!
Bo
-bobo, where are you going?
If we're at an amusement park...
We gotta ride the roller coaster!
Roller coaster!
Wait up, you two!
There it is!
It's the roller coaster!!!
This is a Hair Hunters base, so we should be more cautious! {I'd go with "so we gotta be more careful!"}
And besides... {added and}
THAT'S A FERRIS WHEEL!!!
It appears that... We made it on. {I'd make it "It appears that... We made it on."}
I know, right? {I'd add "I know, right?" Lol}
Guardian of the Ferris Wheel Fair Riswiel
I am the Guardian of the Ferris Wheel, Fair Riswiel.
Bo
-bobo: You're a Hair Hunter, aren't you... {how do we wanna do this line? alpha code or start timing it from the beginning of the scene?}
Fair Riswiel: Now that you're here, I'll beat you up!
That's what I'd like to say...
Fair Riswiel: But it's so cramped that we can't fight... What should we do... ...
Bo
-bobo: ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...
There's someone else on that ferris wheel.
You've got good eyes, Hekkun. It must be an enemy.
I know what you mean!
So she dumped you!? {Aded ?}
Idiot! I was serious about her!
Ayumi...
My bad. Here, have some gum. Sooner or later, something good's bound to happen! {Add "Here" to "have some gum"}
You're so kind...
Huh? What's wrong, Hekkun? {added huh}
Well... You see... Thing is... {added one more part of line as he says is times not }
You're weird, Hekkun.
They're back!
You're not serious!
It's true, you know! {added you know}
For real? I so wanna go!
Huh? They're having a heart
-to
-heart talk!
So, you wanna go together sometime?
Sure! Let's trade phone numbers! {Figured the US say cell phone numbers as opposed to how we say just say phone numbers?}
You son of a b*tch! How dare you k*ll Don Patch!
But you were the one that finished him off!
Don Patch! I promise that I will avenge you! {flared line}
Beauty! Take care of Don Patch for me!
What about you, Bo
-bobo?
I cannot leave this roller coaster until I've defeated this man! {flared line}
Now, let's finish off our battle, shall we? {flared line you can remove the shall we part if it doesn't suit}
Just what I wanted to hear.
Bo
-bobo! Wait a second!
I leave Don Patch in your hands now! {added now}
But Bo
-bobo, that's a ferris wheel!
Hey! You alright? Hey!
So, picking up where we left off...
Yeah, and?
They're still having a heart
-to
-heart conversation.
Hey! Hey, you alright? Hey!
Really? You're a fan too?
Yeah! We have so much in common!
Huh? What's wrong, Hekkun? {added huh}
Well... You see... Thing is... {same as previous line}
You're weird, Hekkun.
They're back again!
So then, what did you think he said?
What? How should I know!? {flared line}
Heh... You'll never believe this, but he... {Shouldn't be "heh" instead of "he" ? Lol}
What? Stop building it up and just tell me!
Not again!
You son of a b*tch! How dare you k*ll Don Patch!
But you were the one that finished him off!
Don Patch! I promise that...
W
-Wait a sec! {added stutter}
Hekkun, weren't you with Don Patch just now? {clarified and flared line}
He melted.
What a relief! {Is this a sign of Beauty going mental?} {I'd go with "What a relife" so she sounds crazier, Lol}
Oh, what a relief!
That's no excuse.
Get a life.
I was worried for a second!
Excuse me, can I buy a balloon?
Here you go.
Thanks.
I'm so happy!
You like it?
Now I'm bored of the roller coaster.
But it was a ferris wheel!
Alright g*ng. Let's roll out. {flared line} {I'd make it "Alright g*ng, let's roll out." so it sounds like a transformers parody for the sheer fact of comedy, Lol}
Wait a sec! {flared line}
Aren't you guys forgetting something important? {added guys}
No, not really.
Fair enough, guess it was nothing then. {re
-worded line}
If that's the case, then it's alright. {re
-worded line}
Of course there's something!
What is it now?
We're kind of in a hurry, so if you got something to say, just say it! {changed to just say it}
I'm the guardian of this ferris wheel! Do you think I'll just let you go?
Right. I forgot about that. {added about that}
Whatever. Now's the best time to catch you off
-guard.
Now behold,
the potential of my true power!{splitted and flared lines}
Are you astonished? {Make him say "Astonished"}
Each of these ferris wheel cars have become giant ba*ls of energy! {Add "Have now become"}
Now, let's see how many of these you can dodge! {Added of these} {added ,}
Eat this! {added eat}
It's coming!
Run for it! {splitted and both Bo
-bobo and Don Patch says these line and changeed to run for it}
Looks like you've dodged the first one. {re
-worded line}
But how about this one?
Here it comes! {changed to here it comes}
Take this! {he says Kuraei}
It didn't work! Get back! {changed to get back}
They dare to dodge it again!? {flared line}
Thanks, Hekkun!
So it's you two? What are you trying to do? {added two}
Well, whatever. Have some of this! {flared line}
Alright, Don Patch! We're doing this like we planned!
Gotcha.
What are you trying to pull?
It's not like that'll help you. {added it's} {Add "That'll help you"}
What's that? Is that my phone? {changed cell to phone, so that it's more of a common word to say than cell}{Added that}
Let's see... {Added line}
Found it. {splitted line}
Incoming Call
Number Withheld
Unknown number? Who could it be? {Make it "Unknown number?"}
Well, whatever.
Hello?
One serving of buckwheat noodles? {removed huh, keeping the suspense in line}
Um... {added um but you can remove it if it doesn't suit}
Who is this calling me? {added um but you can remove it if it doesn't suit and added me}
Yes... No, you've got the wrong number.
Y
-Yes.
That's right.
Yes... Yes... No, goodbye. {added goodbye to make line clearer}
Seriously! Now of all times, a wrong number?
You're open!
Oh sh*t!
Fist of the Nose Hair Secret Technique:
Am I getting hit too!? {changed to !}{HAHAHA Don's face}
Send your scenic views on apostcard!
We do not supply postcards.
move(We do not supply postcards.
So he failed his mission?
You're quite good, Bo
-bobo.
But...
It appears that they've set up one guardian per attraction here. {flared line} {Make it say "It appears that they've..."}
But we don't have the time to go through them one by one. {added but}
Then how about this... {aded this}
How about we each split up to find him?
Good thinking, Hekkun! Let's do that, Bo
-bobo!
Who's gonna find him first?
Sounds fun. Let's do that.
I'm in on this too you know.
Come on.{He says "horah" but couldn't think of a good word to put here. All I can think of is come on}
Alright, g*ng! Now that we've decided on that, let's roll out!
Yeah! I'm gonna find him before you do! {added yeah! and flared line}
Good luck, you two!
Narrator
-They've somehow managed
Narrator
-to defeat the first guardian Fair Riswiel.
Narrator
-But the battle starts now!
Narrator
-And where is Tokoro Tennosuke hiding!? {flared line}
Happy, happy, I'm always happy...
Where does happiness come from?
I will go to you again today.
Happiness comes suddenly when I'm sleeping.
If you're happy,
show everyone by raising your arms into the air!
Happy, happy, I'm always happy.
I wish that it would never end.
Happy, happy, We are happy!
Because I am loved...
...forever!
se
Shiawase wa dokokara Yattekuru darou yo
yo
Aaaaaa
ru
Ryoute wo agete karada de arawase yo
se
tte
Shiawase shiawase Bokutachi wa shiawase
Soshite aisareru kara
Eien nii
We've all split up, but was that a good idea? {changed to good idea} {Change "Is" to "Was"}
Now let's ride that one!
I knew it! He's just playing around! {added just}
You're being really inconsiderate! I'm the one fighting the hard fight here!
Really now? {added now}
An amusement park, huh? Yu... What are you doing now? {Change the "Eh" to "Huh" it sounds better}
Who's Yu? Do we even care about Tomohiro anymore?
Next time on Bobobo
-bo Bo
-bobo:
"Intense Snapshot!
-Hour Amusement Park! The Hippo Mastermind Revealed!"
Intense Snapshot!
-Hour Amusement Park!
The Mastermind Revealed!
Are you saying he's a hippo?